edited version : lost innocence

heyy ppl...tish ish dda edited version of the poem ii posted earlierr...sincee got sho much errors..haha...mii eng badd...=))

lost innocence

the innocence i once held

lost in that pool of lies

the emotions i once felt

given to pay the price

regreting the path i've chosen

i've surrendered to my destiny

there seems to be no more reason

for her spirit has since left me

i've lost everything i once held dear

them i've killed with my own bare hands

now i live with the guilt and the fear

though i'm ruler of all the lands

now all that is left of me

are the scars where the memories loom

all i wanted to do was save her

not send her to her doom

but what's done cannot be undone

my life now is just like a game

all that i have now is a daughter and a son

and they don't even know my name

star warss

wass readingg summ star warss fanficc and all tishh juss got tuu mii headd andd ii hadd tuu get it outt.. =))

it's in anakin's point of view. there'll be one in padme's point of view once ii get dda inspirationn. haha.

lost innocence

the innocence i once held

lost in that pool of lies

the emotions i once felt

given to pay the price

regreting the path i've chosen

i've surrendered to my destiny

there seems to be no more reason

for her spirit has since left me

i've lost everything i once held dear

them i've killed with my own bare hands

now i live with the guilt and the fear

though i'm ruler of all the lands

now all that is left of me

are the scars and the gloom

all i wanted to do was safe her

not bring her to her doom

but what's done cannot be undone

my life now is just like a game

all that i have now is a daughter and a son

and they don't even know my name

copiirightedd

-justhatemiee =)

wadd do ya thinkk??

anyy comments??

post at tagg board.

thanxx

=))

sec 1 sl understudiee for a2 choirr??

lala...
juss got backk frm school.
choirr pracc.
todaee nebaa singg lorhss.
coss ii onii came back for dda last one hourr of dda pracc.
and datt was whenn deyy were announcingg dda new choirr commitee.
sho ish
announcee
announcee
announcee
denn suddenlyy sumbodyy call miee
denn ii huh??
denn deyy saee ii selectedd tuu be sec 1 section leader understudiee for alto 2 choirr.
denn ii huh summoree.
coss ii frm alto onee not alto twoo lehss.
in dda endd, ms chyee switchh miee over tuu alto twoo.
saddd
budd nvmm.
gott neww seniorss tuu tokk tuu.
haha.
i'mm retardedd.
o yarhss.
anyonee wanna watch star wars 3 : revengee of dda sith wibb miee???
i'm dieingg tuu watch it againn.
haha
=))
sendd miee an sms will ya??
thanxxx
newayy.
miee tireddd.
shall blogg next timee.
lala..
byess!

backk =))

heyy heyy ppl...
juss watchedd star warss yesterdaeee!
whee~
damnn damnn nicee lorhsss.
ratherr saddd and gruesomee thoughh.
haha.
gonna gett resultss back soon...
not realliee worrieddd coss ii didn't faill.
thankk godd.
haha...dun realliee no wadd tuu writee lehsss.
finalliee no spammer lerhsss.
o yarhss.
miee enteredd poem competitionn.
dunno whether can makee dda cut anott.
worrieddd siahss.
tmrr got choirr.
aiyarr.
wadd m ii doingg??
haha.
todaee conductress call miee and a feww otherss tuu see her after skool.
den she saee ish audition tuu see if we habb nicee enuff voicess tuu understudyy dda section leaderr cos seniorr saee our voicee niceeee.
lidatt oso muss audition siahss...
wierddd.
hah.
k.
miee stopp crappingg here.
byesss

lalaiciousss

lala...neww blogg =)